【-Feature 】 Qinghai University one of the girls have the economy through a period of unusual experiences. Her through the Internet and a United States girls do pen pal, and up to seven years. She finished college freshman, invited her to the United States together, and their parents express to generously assume all the costs. This transnational friendship was so unusual that critical United States visa office has been moved. She easily won the visa, accompanied by her pen pal in the United States to play for two weeks.
A few years, this young lady would like and then went to the United States, this time to study. She was a few years ago in the United States friendship tour is so unforgettable that she really wanted to use it to impress the United States. In her carefully writing personal statement, she described with heavy ink her this experience. Unfortunately, when she put this article to modify a foreign teacher, they mercilessly put her extremely dear to all deleted.
Foreign teacher so processing its own truth. In his view, the Chinese students and unusual experiences with her professional abilities and ambitions too irrelevant. Application documents are usually foreign schools understand your professional only media and means, if you put in which ink is too much to put in has nothing to do with the professional account, you will dominate.
The unwilling to continue looking for help in Qinghai girl, her article to my hand. In my help, this article has a new structure, use the new language, in spite of all the facts or original. But in the new version of her trip to the United States it is an eye-opener. A short trip, she impressed on the United States is superficial, but those very things still surface inevitably gave her reflect the United States economy developed and vitality.
Sino-American economic development of significant differences both inspired her to help China's economically stronger desire and bring her the learning economy Chinese students to find instructions on economics. In their study, she realized that the United States economy developed and the United States has certainly developed the economics of a contact, so she now want to study in United States. In strong motivation, she is more strenuous than others to study and research in economics, she now has a more solid than others: an economic foundation, for her to the United States has laid the Foundation for further studies. In this way, her personal statement not only portrays her unique experiences, and readers can also through her unique experience to see her in the Foundation and professional respect.
The key is unique
Our Qinghai girl sensitive awareness of his trip to the United States into your own personal statement may impress the United States. She was right, because this is an unusual journey, from an unusual friendship. This experience is not only able to take her and the vast majority of applicants from China, but also makes her different from almost all applicants. With this unique experience as the background, her application materials will be able to attract a glimpse of the United States Professor rush.
His unique place, this is the key to writing applications for the material. Foreign university professors are often to review more than admissions for several times, more than ten times or even dozens of times. If your material is not rich personality of content or language, you are likely to be placed in another book, and the opportunity to pass up.
Too many applications for studying the applicant produced instruments too hasty. They sit in the arduous and TOEFL, GRE, GMAT, language tests, or have too tired, or feel that has finished. Round to the need to make an instrument, often going to buy a ways, yiyanghuahuhu copying a copy just to finish things. Now students showed me reading the application documents, I too frequently read to my own language, knew from my application for the student letter writing copied to. This book provides ideas, writing and language perhaps some lessons. But if you copied the contents of the language and so many leads to cover up or weaken your own personality, but this is really hurting.
Everyone is unique, many applicants complain that they have no unique things to write, this is not right. My daughter was born in Canada, used to sing the songs, the lyrics start is: I am special, you are special, and everyone is special, each in his or her own way. Every time she sang this song is very proud, because she believed that she was very special. If children can have confidence, you as the one at least finish college adults have little reason to feel normal have to be remembered?
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